Kia Ora Jack, My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms. Ka pai for creating such an eye catching digital passport! The background you have chosen to use adds a lovely pop of colour to your blog, and you have managed to include so many awesome facts about yourself as well! It is so exciting to hear how you have 4 siblings in your family. I have a large family as well, with 3 sisters and 2 brothers. There are so many of us that my mum sometimes forgets what my name is! You mentioned how your favourite animal is a deer. What is it about deers that you like? You also mentioned how you enjoy going out hunting with your dad. Have you ever caught anything? If so, what was it and when? I have never heard of the game Roblox before. It would be great if you could reply to this comment and let me know what the game is about, and how you play it. Quick Tip- It is important to acknowledge the work of others, so it would be great if you could edit this blog post and include the source of where you got the deer image from. Keep up the excellent effort! Nga mihi
Kia Ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
Ka pai for creating such an eye catching digital passport! The background you have chosen to use adds a lovely pop of colour to your blog, and you have managed to include so many awesome facts about yourself as well!
It is so exciting to hear how you have 4 siblings in your family. I have a large family as well, with 3 sisters and 2 brothers. There are so many of us that my mum sometimes forgets what my name is!
You mentioned how your favourite animal is a deer. What is it about deers that you like?
You also mentioned how you enjoy going out hunting with your dad. Have you ever caught anything? If so, what was it and when?
I have never heard of the game Roblox before. It would be great if you could reply to this comment and let me know what the game is about, and how you play it.
Quick Tip- It is important to acknowledge the work of others, so it would be great if you could edit this blog post and include the source of where you got the deer image from.
Keep up the excellent effort!
Nga mihi