Story starter!
Thump! He slammed his enormous, grass-covered foot into the middle of the road,
sending shockwaves of dust in all directions.
sending shockwaves of dust in all directions.
With a loud grunt, the troll wrenched the entire, fully tiled roof off a nearby holiday home,
with the owners peering helplessly and frightened out of the downstairs windows.
He didn’t mean any harm, but he just couldn’t help himself…
with the owners peering helplessly and frightened out of the downstairs windows.
He didn’t mean any harm, but he just couldn’t help himself…
All the people ran for their lives frighted running as fast as they could trying
to get away from the grassy troll.
The troll lifted up the roof looking inside and the holidaymaker was in shock seeing a big troll.
He was frightened and he ran straight out of the hotel to a safe spot.
The car swerved and skidded on the road to dodge the troll that was in the way
and the person driving
the car had to slam the brakes and the troll got a fright and ran away.
to get away from the grassy troll.
The troll lifted up the roof looking inside and the holidaymaker was in shock seeing a big troll.
He was frightened and he ran straight out of the hotel to a safe spot.
The car swerved and skidded on the road to dodge the troll that was in the way
and the person driving
the car had to slam the brakes and the troll got a fright and ran away.
The end
This is my troll writing I hope you enjoy it. It is descriptive writing and narrative writing to we had to try to make people speak we did some expressions, comers, expressions to make them talk.
I have enjoyed your writing Jack. You may need to look at you post as it seems to extend beyond the the edge of the page. If you decide to edit you might also like to include the picture you used to prompt your writing. I like the way you have used powerful verbs and adverbs to improve the way your writing sounds when we read it aloud, especially the 'loud grunt'.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteYou have done an outstanding job writing this short story about a troll. Your story was so enticing and intriguing, and the amount of descriptive language you managed to include was fantastic! My favourite line in your story was ‘With a loud grunt, the troll wrenched the entire, fully tiled roof off a nearby holiday home’. There is so much going on in this sentence, and when I listen to this sentence with my eyes closed I can see the entire scenario in my head.
You mentioned how the troll couldn’t help himself from causing trouble. Why is this?
You also mentioned how the person driving their car had to slam on their breaks in order to avoid an accident. Were they ok?
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Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi